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推荐7种雅思写作开头语
发布时间:2020-02-18 22:29:42点击:142

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  下面带路喵跟大家一起来探讨推荐7种雅思写作开头语,加小爱微信:IELTSMM可了解更多雅思相关资讯和免费学习资料。
 
  雅思备考,无论是哪一项考试,都要学好基础知识,比如词汇、语法、题型等知识。为了帮大家更好的学习雅思,取得好成绩,下面,带路喵为大家带来雅思写作开头的七种写法的介绍,希望大家可以认真学习下!以下是详细内容。
 
  Throughoutthehistory,maleleadersoftenmadethesocietymoreviolentandconflicting.Ifwomengovernedtheworld,itwouldbeamorepeacefulworld.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?Giveanexampletosupportyouridea。
 
  讲解不同的开篇方式,从简单到复杂,从低分到高分
 
  模式一:3句式rephrasethetitle+quoteothers'opinions+makeone'sownpointclear
 
  用一个好的句式Recentlytherehasbeenahotdebateinthepublicovertheissuewhethertheworldwouldbemorepeaceifwomengovernedtheworld。
 
  用动词变化和连词连接观点Somepeoplebelievethatwomenwouldbebettergovernorswhileotherpeoplecouldn'tagree。
 
  提出自己的观点,如果现在还没有明确的观点,可以虚晃一枪Iwillanalyzethetwoopinionsandthengivemyownpointofview。
 
  模式二:由于上面一篇文章并没有显示出创造性,所以容易被考官识破,只能得到5到5.5分,实在是模板痕迹太过明显,所以可以考虑升级。
 
  可以从worldgovernor或者man/woman作为切入点,避免直接谈到话题,而是“后退一步”从话题的部分内容中切入
 
  It'sgenerallyagreedthatwomenaremoreconsiderateandpatientthanmen.However,wouldtheworldbemorepeacefulifwomenwerethegovernoroftheworld?Personally,Ibelievethatwomenarebettergovernorsthanmen。
 
  Undoubtedly,womenandmenshouldbetreatedequally.However,whenitcomestogoverningtheworld,itseemsthatmostofthegovernorsaremalesjustastheword"history"indicateshistoryis"hisstory",not"herstory".Inmypointofview,womenwouldmakebettergovernorsifgiventhechance。
 
  模式三:可以考虑抛开背景知识,采用其他的开篇手法,虽然难度可能更大一点。
 
  Atthemerementionofwomengoverningtheworld,mostofusmaynaturallyformanunrealisticpictureofamorepeacefulworldwherethesunalwaysshines.Theothersideofthepicture,however,isjusttotheopposite。
 
  Haveyoueverconsideredwhytheworldshouldbegovernedbymalesmostofthetime?Hasiteveroccurredtoyouthatwomenmightmakemorecompetentleadersandtheworldwouldbemorepeacefulundertheirleadership?Isincerelybelievethatwomencouldatleastmakeequallycapableleadersasmenifnotbetter。
 
  Sometimeswhilelookingbackonthetrip,onemayfindthatseeminglytheroadhasalwaysbeenbumpyandmuddyandsadlythedriverhasbeenamanmostofthetime.Somepeoplemaythereforecometoamisunderstandingthatitisthemandriverwhohasmadethevoyageuncomfortableandevenmiserable.Itisthesamecasewhenitcomestothehumanbeing'shistory.Isincerelybelievethatwhetherthesocietyismoreviolentandconflictingmaynothaveacloserelationshipwiththegenderoftheleader。
 
  通常我们不希望学生以一句话开头,不方便在第一段过早提出自己的所有理由,否则会导致bodyparagraphs没有新观点引出。当然在第一段直接提出观点也不是不可以的。
 
  例如
 
  Idon'tthinktherewillbeanypossibilitiestomakesuchanassumptionastowhethertheworldwouldbemorepeacefuliftheworldweregovernedbywomen.However,Ibelievethatwomenmaynotmakebetterleadersthanmen。如果您还有什么疑问,可以在线咨询我们的专家老师。
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