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　　04-06  双边讨论类大作文社会话题-城市规划

 

　　Some people believe that the best way to reduce the time to travel to work is replace gardens and parks with apartment buildings, which commuters can live. Others disagree.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

 

　　题目大意：

 

　　有人说减少上班路上时间的最好办法是拆掉公园，都造白领公寓。其他人反对。双边讨论并给出观点。

 

　　思路：

 

　　对于the best way此类武断的表达，都选择反对。即支持乙方观点，拆公园造公寓，不是减少上班路上时间的最好办法。

 

　　而乙方反对the best的具体理由，题目没有限定，所以阐述的角度较开放

 

　　1）正面反驳：指出这个做法有坏处（不完美）

 

　　2）反证法：提出有其他的办法，并证明其他办法也能达到同样效果

 

　　审题，找出关键词：

 

　　the best way：最好办法（武断性表述，选择反对，但在论证支持者的理由时，应站在支持者的角度，论证其合理性）

 

　　reduce the time to traveling to work：减少上班路上的时间（限定了目的，双反的观点都应本着这个目标）

 

　　replace gardens and parks with apartment buildings：不要公园，都造白领公寓（这一做法的好处VS坏处）

 

　　Others disagree：反方观点，抽象表述（即not the best way，但具体的理由开放，自由发挥的空间大）

 

　　提纲梳理如下：

 

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　　范文：

 

　　A problem that frustrates working adults is the time wasted on their way to work, with conflicting views on how to tackle this issue. Some people believe that the best solution is to replace the gardens and parks in downtown with apartments,so that working people can live closer to the business center. To me, I do not regard it as a good idea when considering its detrimental effects on environment.

 

　　It is easy to understand why this suggestion is crowned as a panacea. Those who harbor this proposal attribute the long travelling hours to the city planning of modern metropolises, where many residential areas are located in suburb, resulting inthe fact that the residents have to spend much time on commuting between home and workplaces. In this respect, if the government demolished public green pacein downtown to accommodate more working population, it would shorten their distance to offices to a large extent.

 

　　Plausible though the proposal seems, I would stand by those opponents, who attach more importance to the potential air pollution that will ensue. What is ignored by those opt to remove green land is that it is the trees in those gardens and parks that generate oxygen, absorb greenhouse gas emissions. Were it not for these oases,the air quality of our cities would deteriorate, and the resulting public health problems would far outweigh the superficial convenience in travelling. In response to this, other alternatives need to be taken into consideration. For example, the Internet will have its role to play. With e-communication tools like video conferencing, it is possible for people to deal with business at home rather than punching in every morning in the office.

 

　　In conclusion, I would reiterate that removing gardens and parks is not the silver bullet to reduce the commuting time of working people.

 

　　相关词汇：

 

　　Frustrate  使受挫

 

　　Conflicting  对立的

 

　　Downtown  市区

 

　　Detrimental  有害的

 

　　Panacea  灵丹妙药

 

　　Attribute   归咎于

 

　　Demolish  拆除

 

　　Accommodate  提供住宿

 

　　Ensue  随之而来

 

　　Oasis  绿洲

 

　　Greenhousegas emissions  温室气体

 

　　Superficial  表面上的

 

　　Deteriorate  恶化

 

　　Alternative  其他选择

 

　　Punchin 上班打卡

 

　　Reiterate  重申

 

　　Silverbullet   灵丹妙药

 

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